Some people say that main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

With increasing concerns about
environment
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the environment
, people want to know what is the key issue related to
environment
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the environment
. A part of people think that the disappearance of special kinds of trees and animals
are
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is
the key trouble while
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
part of them believe that some other serious phenomenon are existing.
In
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With
To
my knowledge, I agree that losing plants and animals is extremely dangerous to the earth.
However
, we should solve other problems
such
as
air
pollution
and
climate
change
. Admittedly, more and more species are extinct from the world.
For example
, recent forest fire in Australia has destroyed a huge area of the land where millions of animals and trees have been habituated there.
Although
their extinction won’t cause direct influence on humanity’s survival, it actually leads to the
change
of the whole ecosystem.
Such
a
change
will contribute to more serious problems of earth like global warming.
In addition
, decreasing number of species means the survival risk is increasing because biological diversity is a key complex system.
However
,
climate
change
and
air
pollution
are more serious
to
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in
human’s life.
For instance
, the population of
climate
refugee is a big problem for many
countries while
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countries, while
a vast majority of diseases have been
proved
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proven
to have
relationship
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relating
related
to
air
pollution
. Obviously,
climate
change
and
air
pollution
are threatening us so that we have to solve them
firstly
. Base
on
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of
for
the discussion, plants and animals should be environment question because it shows that threaten is closed to us. But
climate
change
and
air
pollution
are becoming the most serious issue to our survival.
Thus
, I think that other problems are more important than losing some special species.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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