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Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.

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In today’s world, education is an important aspect of a child’s life. People of an orthodox mindset may argue that children should be restricted to indulge in educational acts only, in their free
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, modern times beg the contrary. Free
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 educational activities
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 as reading books and/or writing essays are vital for acquiring new ideas. These ideas in turn may help children to apply them in their academic studies in order to get good grades. Participating in events
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 as spelling bees or debate competitions, results in polishing one’s communication skills. There is not a single ounce of doubt that education is the stepping stone for a child to develop their cognitive thinking in order to become competitive and secure a good career for themselves. But labelling recreational activities for children as a waste of
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 is an overstatement. How can a kid become physically fit if he or she is confined to a room of books? Without interactions with other children, In what other manner, will they learn to deal with rough situations
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 as bullying? In one’s younger years, healthy social interaction is key
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 a child may develop social anxiety. Creativity and imagination of a child may not blossom if they do not participate in make believe games and arts. In planning their
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, I believe that parents should make efforts to encourage their
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 to participate in activities which are hybrid of learning and fun,
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 as playing board games or watching educational
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children's
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