The threat of nuclear weapons maintain world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweighs the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some countries, in the globe
is having
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are having
nuclear power, there is having disadvantage if it is
misused but
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misused, but
proper utilization of the energy
have
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has
many positive sides. I agree with the statement as it can reduce the global warming as well as can generate electricity
in
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at
a cheaper
rates
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rate
. Taking into consideration the
first
benefit of nuclear technology is that it will reduce CO2 from the air which directly affects with global warming. Elaborating it with an example, fossil fuels which are used
from
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for
since
the decades releases carbon dioxide in
atmosphere
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the atmosphere
, while
on
the other hand nuclear
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the other hand, nuclear
energy is cleanest in
case
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the case
of
this
gas other plants while producing the energy releases gases which pollutes the atmosphere
where as
on the other hand
whereas
uranium
doesnot
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does not
do
engage in
make
any pollution. Apart from the advantages of nuclear there is one biggest disadvantage of it is that its radiations can harm people.
Talking
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Talk
about
an
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a
well known example of it, United
states
the federal department in the United States that sets and maintains foreign policies
States
had dropped nuclear bombs on the Hiroshima and Nagasaki because of that the whole city was affected the place where it was dropped people got died with that its radiation affected human beings who are far away. So,
main drawback
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the main drawback
of uranium based weapon is it dangerous for the living ones. Concluding, my above reasons nuclear weapons are useful as well as cost effective for the
country but
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country, but
at the same time it is harmful for the people
where
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
were
keeping
this arms
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these arms
for threatening other countries is totally inappropriate.

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