Some people think that no homework should be given to children.other however say that extra work is needed after school for children and teenagers in order to succeed. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
A section of society
believe
that there is no need to give Suggestion
believes
homework
to learners to do from home. While others argue that it is mandatory to get success. I will discuss both view and I Use synonyms
endore
with a later view
put up with something or somebody unpleasant
endure
endured
adore
On the other hand
, some individuals think that without Linking Words
homework
learners can improve their others skills Use synonyms
inspite
of studies because due to Suggestion
in spite
homework
pupils may feel more stress and do not spend time on others activities Use synonyms
such
as games. Linking Words
Secondly
, sometimes there is heavy burden regarding studies so they are not able to spend time with family. Due to which they become frustrated..Linking Words
Linking Words
moreover
, if they do not have any worries they can utilize that time to spend with their family and can feel relaxed.
in addition
Moreover
On the other hand
, some Linking Words
people including
me think that extra Accept comma addition
people, including
homework
is most important for successful life. Because pupils do extra work and can gain more knowledge about other Use synonyms
words as
well as can improve their mistakes and handwriting. Accept comma addition
words, as
Secondly
, students do have more knowledge so that they get more job opportunities. Due to Linking Words
this
they may get success in their life.
To conclude, Linking Words
although
giving no Linking Words
homework
is beneficial for student to learn other skills and to feel Use synonyms
relax
. I believe that it plays a crucial role to improve their academic.Suggestion
relaxed
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite