Some people think that no homework should be given to children.other however say that extra work is needed after school for children and teenagers in order to succeed. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

A section of society
believe
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believes
that there is no need to give
homework
to learners to do from home. While others argue that it is mandatory to get success. I will discuss both view and I
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with a later view
On the other hand
, some individuals think that without
homework
learners can improve their others skills
inspite
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in spite
of studies because due to
homework
pupils may feel more stress and do not spend time on others activities
such
as games.
Secondly
, sometimes there is heavy burden regarding studies so they are not able to spend time with family. Due to which they become frustrated..
moreover
in addition
Moreover
, if they do not have any worries they can utilize that time to spend with their family and can feel relaxed.
On the other hand
, some
people including
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people, including
me think that extra
homework
is most important for successful life. Because pupils do extra work and can gain more knowledge about other
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words, as
well as can improve their mistakes and handwriting.
Secondly
, students do have more knowledge so that they get more job opportunities. Due to
this
they may get success in their life. To conclude,
although
giving no
homework
is beneficial for student to learn other skills and to feel
relax
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relaxed
. I believe that it plays a crucial role to improve their academic.
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