Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter suggest someone you think should receive the award describe what the person does to help the community suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam, You should spend about 20 minutes on this task

Dear Sir, I am writing to let you know that I have heard about the
Award
your Newspaper offers.
Also
,I would like to suggest someone
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deserve
this
award
. Let me share my thoughts. There is Jay, surely you have heard about how he is a
completly
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completely

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great worker in our team. He is not only well knowing for his monthly charity works but
also
, he is a very sincere and passionate leadership.
On the other hand
, I think he is our Ace in the team. so, I suggest him to
This
Award
Hopefully you won't regret it. Would you kindly let the
award
be a Holiday or
also
, it could be
a Trip tickets
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a Trip ticket
Trip tickets

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. Even though it sounds very expensive
award
still, The person who
get
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gets

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it will be so thankful that he will
back
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to the work with a lot of
Energy
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energy

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, and
more
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be more

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creative after recharging for some time. Which surely will affect our Newspaper
Prograss
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Progress
Programs

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. I hope you will look after my suggestion and Thank you for your
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consideration

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.I look forward to
you
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decision.
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Faithfully, Asma
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