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You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country.

#facebook #friend #country #news #item
It has been a long time that we have heard each other. Hope you are doing well. I am glad to know that you want information about the most trending new in India; “People opposing the reservation for lower castes”. For your knowledge I would like to tell you that the reserved quota for backward castes has been raised to 49.5% from 27% due to which the general category candidates are highly disappointed. The majority of the citizens are highly rebellious about
this
 law passed by the Supreme Court, as it would give a competitive edge to the backward people against the general category.
Consequences
Suggestion
The consequences
 of
this
 order by the government are very disastrous. The student under
this
 privilege obtaining 52% score would be preferred over the ones getting 85% by the Universities. Due to
this
 judgment, I am facing
plethora
Suggestion
a plethora
 of problems in getting admission into my desired university. I have secured 88% in my graduation and still I have no Idea where I will
finally
 be landing. I hope
this
 information will serve the purpose. Looking forward to see you in person soon.
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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