The government's investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money. Governments should invest these funds in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
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similarly
arts, music and theatre has its own importance. For
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everyone's
everyone
For example
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the film industry
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a country
the country
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arts, music
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culture
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the culture
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people
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peoples
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