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Some people think that it is beneficial for children to do paid work, while others think that it can be harmful for children. What are the advantages and disadvantages of children doing paid work.

#people #children #work
Children have a
childhood which
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child, which
child which
 is meant to be enjoyed and it's not a time to get jobs
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 Making child work is like destroying their childhood and innocence. Child Labour is considered as one of the biggest crimes in almost every country
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 And there are very few countries who enforce laws for
such
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 I have seen many children ages 3-15 years working in factories, on roads and begging on
streets
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the streets
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 It's there age of studying Not working
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 Our young kids are the future of our country they should be supported to study for the prosperity of our country and coming generations.
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, when small kids go
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to
 work they have to face hard things at
very young age
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a very young age
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 They learn things that are not meant for them
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 It's like loosing all innocence. I'm the
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 would say all children have equal rights to have a good
life even they
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life, even as they
life even as they
 are poor they should be given equal rights and government should pass a law on child labour and making it one of the biggest crimes.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • beneficial
  • harmful
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • financial independence
  • responsibility
  • valuable skills
  • impact
  • education
  • exploitation
  • negative effects
  • social life
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