Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination,while other think that tere are more important factors such as money and appearance.Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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higher, but expensive education
a higher but expensive education
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attributed
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makes them better candidates for high-paid jobs.
But we don't forget that it is not enough to achieve self-condidence
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freedom from doubt; belief in yourself and your abilities
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feeling very cheerful.Suggestion
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