Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and the society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

University
education
is
undoubtly
without doubt; certainly
undoubtedly
a
tremendus
extraordinarily large in size or extent or amount or power or degree
tremendous
help
for
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in
building a good
career but
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career, but
it can
also
can be a great resource for developing human
assetes
anything of material value or usefulness that is owned by a person or company
assets
for
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of
the
society
and it
also
creates an
oppurtunity
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunity
opportunities
for an individual to develop good moral values. The
job
market in todays
world
is very
compitive
involving competition or competitiveness
competitive
. To survive in
this
modern
world
an individual will need specialized
skilles
an ability that has been acquired by training
skills
.
University
education
provides that
oppurtunity
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunity
do learn
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does learn
those skills.
Companis
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Companies
Company
that provide
job
are always looking for people with great talent who can give something back to the company and
university
education
helps those
job
providers to pick the perfect candidate who can be an asset for the company in the future. Though a degree from
an
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a
university
is a great help to get a good
job
it is not the only benefit of
university
education
. As the name"
university
" suggest
an
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a
university
is a representative of the whole
world
. There a student get to learn about many things that a book or class cannot teach him/her. He
get
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gets
to meet people from all over the
world
or at least all over the country. He experiences different culture which can
broden
make broader
broaden
burden
the
horizen
the line at which the sky and Earth appear to meet
horizon
horizons
of his mind. An open minded person can be a great asset for the
society
.
Education
in
an
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a
university
also
helps the individual at a personal level. It helps the
stududents
a learner who is enrolled in an educational institution
students
to be independent.
it
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It
helps them to learn how the real
world
work, how to behave with others, how to deal with
difficult situation
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difficult situations
a difficult situation
on their own. At the
end I
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end, I
would like to say that
university
education
is obviously very important for getting a good
job but
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job, but
it
also
helps the individuals to grow
imotionaly
in an emotional manner
emotionally
and provides the
society
with
individual
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individuals
who can give something back to the
society
.

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