Several languages are in danger of extinction because they are spoken by very small number of people*. *Some say that government should spend public money on saving these languages, while others believe that it would be a waste of money*. *Discuss both these views and give your opinion.*

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Languages are on the brink of extinction, if not all, most of them, as f
ever
(comparative of 'few' used with count nouns) quantifier meaning a smaller number of
fewer
people
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it nowadays. Some people argue that public
money
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should be spent to save it, while others object citing it a waste of fund. I p
ersonally believes
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personally believe
that a
uthorities
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the authorities
should take a stance and try to preserve it.
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essay will demonstrate why preserving a
language
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is of utmost importance.
First
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and foremost,
language
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is a shadow of
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ulture
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the culture
a culture
it r
eflect
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reflects
the country's cultural background. Citizens who still
use
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their
mother
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tongue
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is much a
ttach
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attached
to the tradition and
culture
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of its country or region.
Secondly
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,
mother
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tongue
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gives a sense of nationality among its resident. Masses who speak their regional
language
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feels much attached to their region.
For instance
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, Bihari residents still and deliberately
use
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Bhojpuri as their speaking
l
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anguage
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language, although
although
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they are very much familiar with Hindi in India. By doing so, they feel attached to their land and try to preserve their unique Identity.
However
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, due to globalisation, usage of several languages a
re depleting
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is depleting
at a faster p
ace and
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pace, and
common
language
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is finding its place
instead
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. Some people t
hinks
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think
it is obsolete and cumbersome to
use
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o
ld
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older
language
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, which are spoken by their ancestors. Languages should
also
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be evolved and modernised and there should be one medium to communicate, according to some. As it c
reate
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creates
more understanding and
f
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urther more,
in addition
furthermore
it i
ntegrates larger
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integrates into larger
masses and free t
hey
reflexive form of "them"
themselves
them
from regional barrier. On top of that
,
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,
they don't think government should spend
money
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reviving the old spoken
language
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. It would be a waste of resources according to them, in spite of that government should focus more on d
evelopment
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the development
of the land. Considering all of the above, I must say that languages should be preserved, our
mother
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tongue
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is an umbilical cord of our
culture
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as it c
onnect
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connects
us with our ancestral history. To preserve one's
culture
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one must
use
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their
mother
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tongue
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. So, a
dministration
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the administration
should step in and try to preserve it from its s
ucideal.
plan for an activity or event
schedule
As
money
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worth retrieving a
language
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is a
money
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worth spending.
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