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Universities should allocate the same amount of money to students’ sports activities as they allocate to their libraries. Do you agree?

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Yes. I agree with it, Universities should allocate the same amount of money to
student's
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the student's
, sport
active
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activities
 as they allocate to libraries because even sports is
also
essentisical
absolutely necessary; vitally necessary
essential
 for the people who are pursing their degree in
respective schools
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the respective schools
. Generally, in many college's the management won't prefer to give any extra hour for the
scolars
an ordered reference standard
scales
to play
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play
 games in
playground
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the playground
thatis
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that is
, outdoor games as well as indoor games. They
mainily
for the most part
mainly
 focus
of
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on
 the
acadamic
associated with academia or an academy
academic
 profile to increase the college reputation to be as number one in the world. By doing
such
 all things the
gaduators
receive an academic degree upon completion of one's studies
graduates
gladiators
gutters
 are falling sick due to
vitimins
any of a group of organic substances essential in small quantities to normal metabolism
vitamins
 or not having enough
excersice
the right to enter
access
 to their body to be fit in
regural
in accordance with fixed order or procedure or principle
regular
activies
any specific behavior
activities
. They need
vitimin
any of a group of organic substances essential in small quantities to normal metabolism
vitamin
 D
that is
 coming from
sulight
the rays of the sun
sunlight
 in the early time of daylight. Each and every student is funding a lot to the institution or to the admin for their studies and higher growth for good
carrer
the particular occupation for which you are trained
career
care
careers
 to be a
prat
someone who uses another person's words or ideas as if they were his own
pirate
 for that they are screwing in all the parts of the corner. The
acadamic
a secondary school (usually private)
academy
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