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IT IS GENERALLY AGREED THAT SOCIETY BENEFITS FROM WORK OF ITS MEMBERS COMPARE THE CONTRIBUTION OF ARTIST TO SOCIETY WITH CONTRIBUTION OF SCIENTISTS TO SOCIETY

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In the salad days of mi
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the millennium
he society is polarized into two groups almost equally. Regrading notion that contributions of artist and scientist to society. Different people have their distinct mindset. The following paragraphs should shed light on both approaches before making a final judgement. To commence with
first
 notion there are numerous things to be shared in it
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of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
avour.
First
 and foremost, artist enhances th
ier q
of them or themselves
their
there
ualities and make a creative ar
ts o
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art
f life.
As a result
, increasing ab
ility o
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the ability
f thinking in various forms
such
 as sculpture,p
a
Accept space
,
inting,d
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Accept space
,
nce and so on.
Secondly
, ar
ts i
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the arts
nspire our emotions gives us relaxation. To cite an example, arts of different forms increase awareness of social crimes
such
 as a poverty issues and child la
boures.
someone who works with their hands; someone engaged in manual labor
labourers
On the other hand
 science is a truth of every form of nature. It has lead to gr
eatest d
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great
greater
iscoveries and
also
 inventions for solution of existing problems.
As a result
 fo
r b
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of
etter living hood and fruitful life. Overall,. Society considered both approaches by th
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of them or themselves
their
wn prospective view and various activities involved on
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in
with
t.
As a result
, scientific research ar
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is
ore valuable.

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