Learning English language at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local language and, if so, how?
With the recent inventions in the technologies, the medical equipment has witnessed a major enhancement that can find any disease in the early stages. In the modern world, these developments had led to a huge increase in the average of the life expectancy, which caused many issues that are impacting
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the individual`s
society
. This
essay will discuss these problems and provide some solutions to overcome them.
Firstly
, the ageing populations directly impacting the life of the individuals by limiting the accommodations
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accommodation
availability
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this
fact, they are not to start their own family. For example
, the lack of flats in China forced people to move to another country. Secondly
, ageing population is touching the whole society
in term of resources. The money allocated for developing the society
and it`s
services has moved to support the elder people either as pension or extra expenses to avail the required medical support.
To tackle these problems the governments should adopt multiple measurements. To start with, they can build big complexes and facilitate them with required services to support of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
elder
people. advanced in years; ('aged' is pronounced as two syllables)
older
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will reduce the demand for the accommodations and provide a great chance for the younger generation. Additionally
, the governments can work out a plan with the elder generation to finance these big complexes from their pension, which will reduce the government expenses and focus to develop the society
. For instance
, in the USA the government have reached
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has reached
elder
people to fund the advanced in years; ('aged' is pronounced as two syllables)
older
elder
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To sum up, the average life expectancy has advanced in years; ('aged' is pronounced as two syllables)
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society
. I profoundly believe that any governments can solve these issues by implementing a range of measurements that mentioned in this
essay to mitigate them in a timely manner.Submitted by adnan_jaber on
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