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Sopeople me think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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There are several aspects which play a vital role
for
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in
 ensuring that the children are raised as a good member of the including both aspects parents and
school
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the school
. There isn’t any doubt that parents carry the major responsibility of teaching children how to be the good members of a
society but
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society, but
 at the same time the
school
 plays its own important part as well. Parents are considered as the
first
 tutor of the children as they start their learning procedure by seeing how their parents behave or what they have been taught by them. So the practice of becoming a good member of the
society
 starts from the home itself.
For example
, if a child sees his or her parent being kind to animals, behaving well with poor, not throwing garbage out of trash bins, socializing with other people out of
home
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the home
 he or she will easily adopt the same traits by learning it from them.
On the other hand
, after parents,
school
 is the
second
 most important tutor who is considered for being liable to teach the children about how to become a responsible part of the
society
. Schools
teaches
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teach
 the children how to behave with the other fellow mates, helping each other when in need, not making fun of someone on the basis race, gender or religion which helps them to practice themselves as a good human being and a socially responsible person not within the
school
 only but
also
 in the outer
society
 as well. From the above
discussion it
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discussion, it
 can be stated that for turning the children into the good members of
society parents
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society, parents
 and
school both
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school, both
 have their distinct roles to play which can’t be replaced by each other or omitted.
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