Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What possible solutions can you suggest?

A large proportion of people who get released from the
prision
a correctional institution used to detain persons who are in the lawful custody of the government (either accused persons awaiting trial or convicted persons serving a sentence)
prison
prisons
are highly likely to commit another crime.There are several reasons why
this
happens that includes lack of soft and hard skills to generate income and unavailability of employment. Lack of soft and hard skills has led to criminals repeating the same
crimesabd
finding themselves back into the cells.When
prisioners
a person who is confined; especially a prisoner of war
prisoners
are released from the
prison they
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prison, they
may find it hard to get a
job
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job, hence
hence
they resort to stealing or
commiting
perform an act, usually with a negative connotation
committing
murder
inorder
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in order
to feed themselves or to provide for their families.
Moreso
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More so
,
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,
due to their police records they may hinder them from securing a job because only a few firms are willing to employ people who do not have a clean record
.
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.
This
affects their chances of getting employed and leads to increase in the unemployment rate.When people become idle they are more likely to commit
crime
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crime, hence
hence
it jeopardises their life.
However
, measures to reduce the
occurence
an event that happens
occurrence
of
this
happening strongly lie in the hands of the government.Measures can be put in place to help prisoners in prisons to develop new skills that would help
then
objective case of they
them
make a living when they
cone
move toward, travel toward something or somebody or approach something or somebody
come
back to the economy.
Furthermore
,
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,
the state can put strict rules that closely monitor these people once they are out of
prison
.If people know that they are
bern
brought into existence
born
been
closely monitored they tend to behave in an acceptable way with the fear of going back to
prison
. To
recaputulate
summarize briefly
recapitulate
,
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,
prisons need to be
equiped
provided or fitted out with what is necessary or useful or appropriate
equipped
with soft or hard skills that will help them to provide for themselves once they are back in the society.
Also it
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Also, it
is solely the duty of the government to limit the chances of
reoccurence
happening again (especially at regular intervals)
recurrence
occurrence
of criminals going back again to the
prison

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Rehabilitation
  • Reintegrate
  • Social stigma
  • Recidivism
  • Criminal records
  • Ex-offender
  • Associations
  • Comprehensive
  • Workforce
  • Mentoring
  • Incentivize
  • Stigmatize
  • Subsidies
  • Legitimate
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