Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What possible solutions can you suggest?

A large proportion of people who get released from the

prision

a correctional institution used to detain persons who are in the lawful custody of the government (either accused persons awaiting trial or convicted persons serving a sentence)

prison

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are highly likely to commit another crime.There are several reasons why

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happens that includes lack of soft and hard skills to generate income and unavailability of employment. Lack of soft and hard skills has led to criminals repeating the same

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finding themselves back into the cells.When

prisioners

a person who is confined; especially a prisoner of war

prisoners

are released from the

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prison they

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prison, they

may find it hard to get a

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job, hence

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they resort to stealing or

commiting

perform an act, usually with a negative connotation

committing

murder

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in order

to feed themselves or to provide for their families.

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due to their police records they may hinder them from securing a job because only a few firms are willing to employ people who do not have a clean record

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affects their chances of getting employed and leads to increase in the unemployment rate.When people become idle they are more likely to commit

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crime, hence

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it jeopardises their life.

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, measures to reduce the

occurence

an event that happens

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happening strongly lie in the hands of the government.Measures can be put in place to help prisoners in prisons to develop new skills that would help

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then

objective case of they

them

make a living when they

cone

move toward, travel toward something or somebody or approach something or somebody

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back to the economy.

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the state can put strict rules that closely monitor these people once they are out of

prison

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.If people know that they are

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brought into existence

born

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closely monitored they tend to behave in an acceptable way with the fear of going back to

prison

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summarize briefly

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prisons need to be

equiped

provided or fitted out with what is necessary or useful or appropriate

equipped

with soft or hard skills that will help them to provide for themselves once they are back in the society.

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is solely the duty of the government to limit the chances of

reoccurence

happening again (especially at regular intervals)

recurrence

occurrence

of criminals going back again to the

prison

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