Modern technology is creating a single world culture and if is good for mankind. do you agree or disagree with statement.

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I see eye to eye with a central idea for various reasons.
First
and foremost, the technological improvements in the field of communication
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mails
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mail
which changed the way of people communicate to each other. It is a new means of communication, a
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faster
access to information and news.
Therefore living
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Therefore, living
standards of people is rapidly
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increasing
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Secondly
, internet has a become a most preferable source
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acquiring a knowledge and information related to different fields.
As a
result people
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result, people
can tackle their problems in easiest way.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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