Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

It is often suggested that people nowadays are buying roughly similar products and
therefore
the differences between countries are diminishing. In my opinion, I feel
this
is a negative development for the reasons o
f
Suggestion
for
the loss of
culture
and the monopoly b
y
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of
the large
company
.
First
of all, the same products available worldwide will impact the original
culture
of a country. Given the advanced communication and transportation, it is common that some products will be sold worldwide. With the new products being introduced to the local market,
in addition
with a decent price many customers will be attracted and alter their expanse habit, and to some extent change the
culture
.
For example
, the affordable USA fast food chain in Hong Kong dramatically changed peoples’ eating h
abits especially
Accept comma addition
habits, especially
for the youngsters, the importance of traditional food became less significant. A country’s
culture
would be influenced by the import goods. Apart from that, the same products available worldwide will lead to the monopoly of the big
company
which will post disadvantage to customers. In the moment when countries become more similar due to the similar products they are buying, meaning the giant
company
will have more chance to m
onopoly
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monopolize
monopolise
monopolizing
the market, or even manipulate the customers, in order to m
aximum
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maximize
their profit.
For instance
, a famous smartphone giant was cancelled the traditional 3.5mm headphone port and replaced with a type C port, the purpose is to revenue from the headphone related products.
However
, customers must accept it because it is one of the main smartphone producers. In conclusion, the more similar products available worldwide a
re causing
Suggestion
is causing
the countries in the world less different.
This
will be a negative development due to the disappearance of
culture
and the monopoly of the big companies. We need variety under the influence of globalization. b
uying
Suggestion
Buying
roughly similar products and
therefore
the differences between countries are diminishing. In my opinion, I feel
this
is a negative development for the reasons o
f
Suggestion
for
the loss of
culture
and the monopoly b
y
Suggestion
of
the large
company
.
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