Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

Earth is
such
a beautiful place with so many different varieties of plant and wildlife. But
today
in the 21st
century we
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century, we
are facing a major threat with regard to the disposal of various kinds of
waste
which is left behind by the human race.
Waste
generating from domestic, industrial, automobiles, IT
etc
continuing in the same way
etc.
are all harming
Earth
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the Earth
to a very bad extent. In the olden days when something was broken, people used to get it repaired and
use
it again, but that’s not the case with the generation
today
who just dispose it off and buy a
next
set of the same thing. In the early 19th and 20th century, the total amount of rubbish/garbage generated across the world was far lesser than the amount of
waste
generated just by the IT sector
today
. Earlier most
waste
could be disposed
off
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of
in
such
a way that, they didn’t harm the environment at all. But the
waste
generated
today
harm the environment, plants and wildlife in a very adverse way, thereby making us wonder as to have a permanent fix to
this
grave concern. People now a day’s
use
so much single
use
plastic which is one of the worst forms of garbage as it takes ages to degenerate or decompose. Almost anything and everything we buy and
use
comes in single
use
plastics which should raise an alarm for an action to be taken.
Also
the kind of
electronic
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electronics
(
specially
to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
especially
IT and related stuffs)
waste
being generated, right from computers to mobile batteries to televisions are all only adding to the chaos. One example that comes into my mind often is the footwear we
use
, in
earlier we
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earlier, we
had cobblers who could be found in every city to mend broken footwear’s, but
today
most people prefer to buy a new footwear over repairing an old used product. The higher purchasing capacity and the fast pace of life in the 21st century has made people
to
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at
least bother about used and old stuffs.
Therefore
, the
government’s
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governments
government
today
have a very important role to play, wherein they should probably give subsidy, tax benefits or compensate the companies, that are ready to take up recycling of used and discarded products to make new products. For
eg
as an example
e.g.
egg
paper, plastic, clothes, automobiles and various other daily
use
products which we are highly dependent upon can be refurbished into something new and usable. Governments should
also
create awareness by advertising in daily newspapers and televisions about the negative impacts that
this
present careless attitude of the people is creating for them and their future generations too.

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