It is believed that some people are born with certain talents for instance in sports and music, others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician ? Discuss your views and give your opinion.
Many people agree with the fact that some people are born with talents like sports and music.
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talent, but
musician
. In my view every person possesses some kind of skill or Suggestion
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trade, which
skillful
trainer.
There are a number of people who are born with certain talents having or showing knowledge and skill and aptitude
skilful
such
as cricket, football or music. These people with minimal training and guidance have the ability to excel in their fields.When they are able to perform well in their respective fields
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fields, then
then
they also
become an inspiration for others. Furthermore
, this
in turn helps them to earn fame and respect for their nation.
For instance
Cricketer Virat Kohli who
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Kohli, who
then
his talent
was recognised throughout the country.
Many people who are born talents at times are not able to showcase their skills because of lack of opportunities and money. Government and NGO’s can provide support such
personalities in order to enable them to come into the limelight.
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However, many
skillful
in a specific having or showing knowledge and skill and aptitude
skilful
trade
.These people have to develop and polish a specific trade
in order to become an expert in that field.These people are able to represent their country on a global platform and showcase their talent
better than people who are born talent
because these people undergo years of training so as to become skillful
in having or showing knowledge and skill and aptitude
skilful
specific
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a specific trade
specific trades
trade
. To exemplify, we can take the case of cricketer Rahul dravid who
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skill
of a cricketer but he went under multiple training sessions and Suggestion
the skill
finally
emerged as the most successful captain of Indian cricket team.
In conclusion, people who are born with certain talents are able to perform well
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well, however
however
the people who undergo training so as to develop specific trade
are also
able to perform equally well in many instances. In my opinion, any child can be given training and support which can help in the development of a skill which a child may not possess by birth.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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