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In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution?

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With great pleasure, I recommend Mr
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ARJUN YADAV MATTAPALLI for pursuing MS in Computer Science at your esteemed university. He has been a student of the college and completed B.Tech in Electrical and Electronics Engineering during the year 2007-2011. During the period of my association with him
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 was able to determine his natural talent to comprehend concepts fast and apply those in identifying problems associated with it.
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, a quality that will be highly useful in his contribution as Research / Graduate / Teaching Assistant during his proposed graduate program. Over the years at the Institution, He moulded himself into a professional Engineer with great potential. He was an attentive student in the class, receptive to new ideas and always looks at the subject in different comprehensive angle with utmost interest and has the capacity to present his thoughts logically. His practical lab skills and ability to initiate and focus is praiseworthy. Additional experience that he has gained in the field of Computer Technologies makes him an ideal candidate to bring perspective beyond the academic curriculum. Outside academics, He has equally remained active in diverse co-curricular activities held regularly in the campus. An active member of the Departmental Technical Club and other cultural activities, He has the ability to contribute to all aspects of the university learning environment. Considering his performance and additional experience gained
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