In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development?
It is a general belief that a lot of small local shops have
shutdown
because customers prefer to shop from big shopping centres Suggestion
shut down
such
as malls.Linking Words
This
is a negative development.Analysing both the financial strain that these petty traders go through and the difficulties encountered by rural dwellers in purchasing their immediate needs will help to buttress my reasons.
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Firstly
, there's going to be an increase rate of poverty in the society at large. Linking Words
For instance
, the owners of small shops are more in number when compared Linking Words
with
the owners of big shops.Suggestion
to
Thus
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,
customers shopping from big shops will lead to enriching only a small group of people while a good number of local traders that constitute the majority of the populace are impoverished.Accept space
,
Therefore
, it can be seen that shutting down of small shops is a negative development.
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On the other hand
, rural dwellers who Linking Words
purchase
most of their commodities from small shops face a lot of difficulties when they want to Use synonyms
purchase
their immediate needs especially at odd hours.Use synonyms
For instance
, I remember one fateful day we needed to Linking Words
purchase
Use synonyms
oral rehydration solution
for my dad who was having watery Suggestion
an oral rehydration solution
diarrhea
. We had to take a bike to the city which is about 1000km away from our home.frequent and watery bowel movements; can be a symptom of infection or food poisoning or colitis or a gastrointestinal tumor
diarrhoea
This
stress was all because many pharmacy shops close to our place of residence have Linking Words
shutdown
because only a few patronize them, and those that Suggestion
shut down
purchase
Use synonyms
from
Suggestion
since
them
do so when they are in dire need of the commoditypeople in general
they
,
with the erroneous belief that owners of small shops have a lot of expired products in their Accept space
,
shops
. So it's obvious here that the closure of small shops due to more patronize for bigger shops Suggestion
shop
do
more harm than good.
In conclusion, it can be seen that the financial challenges and the difficulties encountered by those living in rural areas in purchasing their immediate needs are forms of negative development to our society.It is envisaged that if nothing is done about itSuggestion
does
,
Accept space
,
this
will increase the rate of crimeLinking Words
,
especially in rural areas since these owners of small shops might decide to resort to robbery as their means of livelihood.Accept space
,
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