The charts give information about two genres of TV programmes watched by men and women and four different age groups in Australia.
Two
charts below indicate how popular Correct article usage
The two
of
Change preposition
apply
reality
shows and game
shows watched
by Australian Add a missing verb
are watched
in
ages and genders. Change preposition
of
Overall
, it is clear that
the proportion of women watching reality
shows significantly overwhelms the those of men although
female
watch slightly fewer Fix the agreement mistake
females
game
shows. On the other hand
, the
people Correct article usage
apply
in
both genders aged above 45 tend to watch television more Change preposition
of
regular
than the other groups.
In Change the word
regularly
reality
programmes, nearly 70% is
women which Correct subject-verb agreement
are
is
twice as many as the percentage of men who choose Change the verb form
are
this
genre of TV
show. Add an article
the TV
a TV
Nevertheless
, in term of game
programmes, male
is prone to watch Add an article
the male
a male
game
shows and its percentage accounted for 61%, overtaking that female
by merely 1%.
As can be seen, the proportion of Change preposition
of female
reality
show watchers increases steadily from ages 16 to 45 with the lowest figure at just 50% and the greatest percentage, at 68% of the over-45s. In contrast
, the number of game
shows watched by 25 to 44-year-olds is considerably
Replace the adverb
considerable
than
the number watched by 16 to Correct quantifier usage
more than
24 year olds
and those over 45.Add a hyphen
24-year-olds
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Vocabulary: Replace the words reality, game with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 8 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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