The diagram below shows how paper is made and recycled.

The diagram below illustrates the

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of manufacturing

a

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paper

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and the way it is recycled. The

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of creating a

paper

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has five steps.

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, the radiata pine thinnings are collected and

then

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bark

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of the wood is removed by a special drum called

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the De-barking

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De-barking

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Debarking

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drum in

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second

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step. The de-barked wood is

then

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sent to a chipper and

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afterwards

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a thermomechanical refiner which

utillises

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utilises

water Afterwards the product is sent to a

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paper making

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machine. The recycling

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of

paper

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has six steps, starting with the

paper

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products

such

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as newspapers. Talking about the

second

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step, the used

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is directed to kerbside collection and

subsequently

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to after collection. It

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then

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go

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through a

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de-inking

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and fine screening happens

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. Later it is mixed

by

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thermomechanical and

recycle

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pulp with the use of water. In the

end

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the

last

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product

is send

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back to the

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paper making

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machine to recreate

paper

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.