Some people say that music is a good way to bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

There are lots of things that connected different nations with various of cultures and ages all around the world.
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essay is totally
agrees
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agreed
with
this
statement
.
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.
This
essay will
first
discuss how
music bringing
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music, bringing
multiple people from different continents and years together and how it reflects on their
behavours
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviours
behaviour
. The main reason why
music
links nations because it is the language of the
planet so
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planet, so
we do not need to speak
italian
of or pertaining to or characteristic of Italy or its people or culture or language
Italian
or
french
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French
,
russian
of or pertaining to or characteristic of Russia or its people or culture or language
Russian
or
chinese
a native or inhabitant of Communist China or of Nationalist China
Chinese
to understand
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understand
what the composer wants to impress, what emotions he feels, what story he wants to tell to the audience.
For example
,
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,
the visitors of the Austrian Opera are mostly tourists from various continents with cultural differences so it does not matter what your mother tongue is at
this
time you speak
language
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the language
of art and you are the participant of magic
music
concert.
Nowadays many
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Nowadays, many
people from babies to old ones are interested in playing
music
. It does not matter how old are you if you want to play guitar, piano or violin only your desire is a key to success.
Music
is an indicator of your feelings it shows either you happy, sad, angry, stunned, furious, exhausted or delighted. Hearing songs
is
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are
a special
prosess
a particular course of action intended to achieve a result
process
also
during which your brain and body relax, your mood improves and you start to feel yourself much comfortable.
For instance
, The New York Times recently report that majority of people who listen to
classic
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classical
music
every day for 15 minutes much sociable in
foreigh environment
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a free environment
free environment
foreign environment
. In conclusion, it may be true that
music
is a great connector to humans from range part of the Terra.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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