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In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e-books rather than paper books. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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In the modern world, people are increasingly reading books online and the demand of printed books has declined. In my opinion, the advantages of
this
 trend outweigh its drawbacks. There are many benefits to reading electronic books. The
space
 required for storing electronic books is very small compared to the
space
 required for storing printed books. Electronic books can be stored in small pen drives or
in
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 CDs and it is easy to carry them around.
Actually hundreds
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Actually, hundreds
 of books can be stored in a small pen drive.
By contrast
, a large amount of
space
 is required to store
paper
 books. People usually need a room to keep their academic books. Another advantage is that people can buy ebooks online and download them to their device within seconds of completing the purchase. But if they buy
paper
 books online, they have to wait for days or even weeks before their order is delivered. Better still, eBooks are eco-friendly. Since they do not require
paper
, no trees are cut down to produce eBooks.
In addition
, it is possible to get books published in different parts of the world. People can read books which are usually not available in their local stores. The biggest disadvantage of eBooks is that they require us to stare at a screen for a long time and
thus
 they may cause eye strain and other problems. More and more people have vision problems in the modern world because of the extensive use of computers.
However
, when compared to the convenience eBooks provide,
this
 problem is negligible and
also
, vision protection screens for computers are available now. In conclusion, it is not hard to see that eBooks are better than
paper
 books in many aspects. They are portable and they don’t occupy physical
space
. They might cause eye
strain but
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strain, but
 it can be easily prevented by using protective screens.
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