People today generally have better lives than people in the past did. To what extent you agree or disagree ?
Some people support the opinion that nowadays
life
is more facilitated for people to live Use synonyms
comfortbaly
rather than old days. Because of the technological revolution that took place in our in mental comfort; without stress
comfortably
last
centuries, people become more civilized and culturedLinking Words
,
that contributed to change their old Accept space
,
prespectives
. Other people believe that the past was a way of regarding situations or topics etc.
perspectives
definetly
better, when without question and beyond doubt
definitely
life
was more quiet, people were having stronger connections, everything must took its convenient Use synonyms
time
to be done on contrary to our present where we do all our duties in a hurry without feeling any joy. I believe that our past and our present are completing each otherUse synonyms
,
both of them have them have advantages and disadvantages.
The development in Accept space
,
technology which
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technology, which
accordingly
has resulted in the improvement of many aspects of Linking Words
Use synonyms
life
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life, such
such
as communication, Linking Words
transport
, education, health, construction, network and others, has made people's Suggestion
transportation
life
much easier and provided them with the opportunity to implement properly their daily tasks. On the other side, many drawbacks have clearly appeared in our present daily Use synonyms
life
, as an illustrationUse synonyms
,
people are doing their duties in a fast track even they can't enjoy their pastime as before, social media websites Accept space
,
such
as Linking Words
facebook
and Suggestion
Facebook
twitter
have been a a series of chirps
Twitter
susitute
for family and friendsSuggestion
,
a family may not meet daily because they might be working all day and actually have no Accept space
,
time
Use synonyms
.
Another deficiency is the loss of connections between people and destroying social Accept space
.
life
Use synonyms
,
it is easier to call someone Accept space
,
ontheir
mobile phones Suggestion
on their
instead
of going to visit him. Linking Words
Also
, electronic devices due to their easy mobility, it might be Linking Words
main cause
for multiple issues related to social Suggestion
the main cause
life
as we stated beforeUse synonyms
,
Accept space
,
moreover
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,
health and safety of human beings might be threatened due to the radiations emitted by these electronic devices that we carry most of the Accept space
,
time
.
Turning to Use synonyms
past
Suggestion
past times
a past time
time
when everything was simple, there is neither mobile phones nor heavy electronic devices. People went Use synonyms
visit
each other whenever they could because they had Suggestion
to visit
time
to do so and there were no alternatives like the virtual world we are living in nowadays, Use synonyms
this
resulted in increasing the Linking Words
solidatiry
of the society and acquiring good and loveable traitsa union of interests or purposes or sympathies among members of a group
solidarity
.
Regarding to the Accept space
.
enviroment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
,
pollution was constituting lower percentage from our atmosphere as well as harmful radiations weren't emitted heavily.
Accept space
,
Although
, the past may seem holding various Linking Words
sumups
, but people were not that peaceful because of wars that an oil reservoir in an internal combustion engine
sumps
occured
that come to pass
occurred
time
and was a reason for many people to suffer and to feel unsecuredUse synonyms
.
Accept space
.
Also
, we can't deny that the developing technologyLinking Words
,
Accept space
,
although
it has drawbacks, but it can keep people connected anytime anywhere and Linking Words
i
think people refers to the speaker or writer
I
needed
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need
this
advantageLinking Words
.
As a conclusion, people always could improve their adaption skills over the ages , wether in past or present , they took use of the advantages and avoided the disadvantages as much as they could , so that they survive and enjoy a happy Accept space
.
life
Use synonyms
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