*ASSIGNMENT* Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is by reducing the maximum speed limits on vehicles, others think there are other better ways. *Discuss both sides and give your opinion.*

Road
transportation is the most common means of transport and has high accident occurrence which has raised multiple opinions on the best way to keep the
road
guarded. Some believed that reducing the speed of automobile is the most ideal way of
road
safety
while others believe that there are other actions to be taken in order to keep the
road
safe. I agree that there are better movements
such
as quality
road
works and training on the use of roads by enforcement agencies to keep the highway secured. On the one hand, some people believed that reducing the speed limit of vehicles is the best way to enhance the
safety
of roads. One of the reasons for
this
claim is that when there's break failure, motorists are able to handle the situation when the speed is not high.
Similarly
, reducing speed restriction prevents
vehicle
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the vehicle
from
summersaulting
an acrobatic feat in which the feet roll over the head (either forward or backward) and return
somersaulting
as
this
usually occur
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usually occurs
on
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at
in
high-speed. It is not unknown that over-speeding at sharp bends are
also
unsafe.
Therefore
, cutting down the rate at which automobiles accelerate minimises accident occurrence.
On the other hand
, other people suggested that there are other actions that can be taken to ensure
road
safety
and I concede. One of them is providing standard highways
.
Accept space
.
In other words
, bad roads can be
disastrous especially
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disastrous, especially
the ones with potholes which can cause
accident
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accidents
an accident
if not repaired within a short period of time.
For instance
, the office of the Federal
Road
Safety
Commission Marshall accounted that out of the total
road
accidents that happened in December, 60% was
as a result
of bad roads.
As a result
of
this
effort,
road
fatalties
a death resulting from an accident or a disaster
fatalities
will be reduced.
Also
, vehicle inspection officers and
road
safety
officers need to enforce every
individuals
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individual
who
come
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comes
for driving licence to attend training and write
test
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tests
if possible.
This
is because there are several amateur drivers on the roads who do not understand
road
signals.
This
will minimise the number of inexperienced drivers on the highway. In conclusion, there are several opinions on
best
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the best road safety measure
road
safety
measure, I believe that training and having good roads are the best ways to have roads safe.
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