10. Talk about a job that helps making the work better place: What the job is? How you learn about it ? Why do you think it helps so much? And explain why do you think it make the world better place.

There are  thousands of occupations in the world.  Some need professional training,
such
as nurses, teachers, lawyers;  and ot
her m
any of various alternatives; some other
another
ight only need hand-on training. One
job
I want to talk about right now is waste collector,
also
known as re
fuse collector.
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a refuse collector
In Edmonton, they drive a
garbage
truck on the street around the city to pick up garbages and
then
deliver them to Ed
monton
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the Edmonton garbage management centre
garbage
management centre. I started to pay an attention to
this
job
when I saw them collecting wastes and dump them to the truck from my back yard at the moment when I moved into my current place about five years ago. 
Although
this
job
dose no
t need 
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doesn't need
professional training, waste collectors are super important to maintain a clean living environment and reduce pollution to our habitant.  Because, as I said above, they pick up non-recyclable waste materials from homes, apartment buildings, and businesses and transport them to the
garbage
management centre for la
ndfilling.
Every day, there are tons of non-recycling wastes produced by local habitants. Properly dumping them to a
garbage
processing ce
ntres a
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centre
re crucial to keep li
ving environment c
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the living environment
lean and prevent mice or cockroaches overly growing. All these creatures will transmit contagious diseases, which will place citizens' health into risks.  About 3 years ago, in Edmonton, refuse collectors went on a strike. It took the city government about 1 months to reach the new contract with them. During that pe
riods,
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period
all garbages were accumulated in ev
ery where a
to or in any or all places
everywhere
ll around the city. Along with bad smelling from the
garbage
bags, all the wastes turned Edmonton into a large
garbage
centre.
Therefore
, the
job
of refuse collectors is super important to the human societies.
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