Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

International tourism is one of the

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development

industry. Some people believe that

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causes some stress among visitors and locals in spite of the toleration between individuals from overseas.

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belief is fully acceptable in terms of socio-cultural differences and the local

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.

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-cultural differences occupy a great portion of the occurrence of the

tension

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between locals and foreigners. Local cultures are not willing to integrate with universal approaches and their public pretends to keep their culture from foreign interactions.

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, tourists from western countries, where citizens are liberal as well as open-minded, face undesirable problems in

Egypt where

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Egypt, where

people are extremely conservative to respond to tourists' intentions. Locals do not prefer to speak to women tourists due to socio-cultural customs and

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might result in

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issues.

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, even though tourists have a desire to discover different lands and continents, locals do not eager to accommodate their demands properly owing to socio-cultural distinctions. The local

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encompasses a great deal of companies and employees. Tourists are a primary source of income for them because their expenditures make a big positive impact on the local

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thanks to the foreign currency

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flow, thereby

any kind of problems relating to the discomfort of the visitors bringing negative attitudes towards the region.

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may result in

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.

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, less than a decade ago, one tourist was robbed by one of the hotel staff in a small popular

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village in Egypt. Even though the losses of the victim were compensated and the local police ultimately captured the thief, many prospective tourists did not prefer to visit that area for years.

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, the local

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deprives of a great amount of income due to

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unfortunate event.

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essay argues that the relationship between locals and tourists are quite

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delicate, so

that socio-cultural alterations and economic effects of tourism on local communities create a noticeable amount of

tension

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. In my opinion,

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tension

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should be controlled by the cooperation among locals and governments, since increased

tension

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may cause mentioned losses for the public.