Some people say that when children under 18 are committing a crime they should be punished, while others believe they should be educated. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion.
There is often a dichotomy in opinion, on whether the juvenile
crime
should be sentenced to punishable or putting them in
rehabilitation Suggestion
at
center
is the best possible solution. I strongly believe that underage criminals should be made aware about their actions rather than being punished straightaway.
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To begin
with, if youngster found guilty in
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of
crime
, they should be sent to rehabs center
. To put in Suggestion
a rehab centre
rehabs centre
rehab centre
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rehab center
other
way, they should be taught that what would be the consequences of committing the any of various alternatives; some other
another
crime
and how much it cost the victim? To illustrate this
, the boy of age 16 has being
forgiven by the mother of have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
been
victim
, who has killed his own best friend during the football game. Suggestion
the victim
a victim
Although
, it was hard for the mother to forgive that crime
, the purpose for doing so is to understand the criminal that killing is not the answer in the real world. This
act of kindness helped him to control the rage and anger.
Furthermore
, penalizing the young criminals will have the detrimental impact on the country
. In other word, the young generations are considered to be the valuable assets of the nation. If judicial system
forgive them and sent him to Suggestion
the judicial system
rehabilitation center
, they might Suggestion
the rehabilitation centre
rehabilitation centre
a rehabilitation centre
rehabilitation centres
evolved
as Suggestion
evolve
good citizen
of the Suggestion
good citizens
a good citizen
country
which eventually helped the society to prosper. For instance
, the scientist in the United States of America has found the cured of the brain cancer which is the common disease nowadays but
he was once arrested Accept comma addition
nowadays, but
for
the burglary case when he was only fourteen Suggestion
in
year
of age. Suggestion
years
Instead
, of sentencing him ten year
imprisonment, the jury decided to send him to the government school to start his education and provide him the food on Suggestion
years
daily basis
. He emerged as a scientist and eventually brought the fame to the Suggestion
a daily basis
country
.
To conclude this
, penalizing the underage adolescent is a way easy job for the jury or judicial system but
in my opinion the talent of the nation can only be found through Accept comma addition
system, but
the young
generations. Polishing and teaching them personal skills may help the Suggestion
the younger
country
to bring the new innovations.Submitted by alamfakhar963 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
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- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite