The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1

University

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, Canada (1992-2007) The graph represents the

number

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of university

graduates

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from the

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1992 to 2007 in the country

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Canada.

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, it represents the difference between the male and female

graduates

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during the same.

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, the

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of

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from 1992

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drastically changed over the years. The

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of female

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in the initial

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was around 90 thousand, which gradually increased in the

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1995.

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, the

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of male

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initially

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were

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about 70 thousand which

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gradually increased in the

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1995. There was a downfall in the

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of

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in the

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1998.

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, in the later

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the

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of women

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increased and it reached the highest in 2007 with more than 140,000

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. There was

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a decent increase in the

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of male

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by 2007 with more than 90,000

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. But,

overall

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the

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of female

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in Canada

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more than the

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of male

graduates

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during that period.