The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030.
The figure given above demonstrates how UK citizens travel daily using the automobile, bus, and
train
during the period
of
1970 and 2030.
It is apparent from the information supplied that the car has the most used all the time that given Change preposition
apply
period
. The bus
usage which is Correct article usage
Bus
second
much-used by the
commuters declined during the Correct article usage
apply
period
of
1970 and 2030. Change preposition
between
The
Correct article usage
Train
train
usage, meanwhile, slightly climb and occupy the second
much-used
vehicle Correct quantifier usage
most much-used
at
somewhere in the vicinity of the year Change preposition
apply
of
2012.
In 1970, approximately 5 million people have traveled by car and Change preposition
apply
this
rate increased negligibly in the following decade. The bus stands in the middle of the list with about 4 million commuters in 1970. The
following years until about 2012, declined continuously and plunged to 3,5 million commuters which Change preposition
In the
are
the same rate Correct subject-verb agreement
is
with
Change preposition
as
train
users.
The train
started to slightly increase until 2000. After a decade, this
rate didn't infer until 2010. Furthermore
, the
Correct article usage
apply
train
usage will occupy the Change the verb form
training
second
of the şist by rising steadily during the period
of
2010 and 2030.Change preposition
between
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