Today more and more tourists are visiting place where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antartic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

In the modern innovative,
peopele
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
mostly like visiting different types of places.It is well known fact that travelling has become an integral part of our
lives
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life
.
Mostly
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Most
people
visting
the activity of making visits
visiting
those areas where a lot of
difficulties but
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difficulties, but
people like to
visting
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visit
visiting
be visited
have visited
those areas in which Sahara desert and Artartica.In my believed a lot of disadvantages rather than
adavantages
the quality of having a superior or more favorable position
advantages
.
First
of all, here
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
would like to inject some disadvantages
reagarding
with regard or relation to
regarding
the statement.If we consider that to find
accomdation
making or becoming suitable; adjusting to circumstances
accommodation
in
this
places
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place
is very
diffcult
not easy; requiring great physical or mental effort to accomplish or comprehend or endure
difficult
and people confuse that how to manage and tackle
this
situation.
For example
, a person decided to visit
this
place they still confuse little bit because there are not more
faclities
a building or place that provides a particular service or is used for a particular industry
facilities
such
as,
restuarant
a building where people go to eat
restaurant
,
Accept space
,
accomdation
making or becoming suitable; adjusting to circumstances
accommodation
accommodations
etc.Futhermore,

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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