Some people say that professional work like doctor and teacher great contribution to the society should be paid more than those people in the field of sports and entertainment to what extent do you agree or disagree

It is true that wages are always

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varied

varying

according to the jobs. To

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different people have various

aspect

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aspects

regarding the pays of different feed a group of people deem that professional workers

such

as

doctor

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doctors

a doctor

and teacher deserve more than than sports and other field I not worthy agree with

this

statement because of numerous reasons which I will discuss before embarking any conclusion. There is no denying in the fact that teachers are the building blocks

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the society they always make country future because they provide education to the young generation not only

teachers but

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teachers, but

also

doctors play an essential role in every person's

life

because of them people became as fit as fiddle due to

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reasons

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reason

government already pay a lot to

this

profession. No doubt in the professional read people's

life

are secured because they can get pension after retirement

moreover

as your experience has increased significantly so there wages are

also

increased that's why their income is not mitigate

nevertheless

celebrities income always fluctuate according to their work that's why they continuously do struggle in their

life

to maintain their position in the country

moreover

audience expect to to their celebrities if some time peoples are not meet with their Desire of the audience

then

their popularity popularity may reduced and they have to do plethora of efforts to achieve the same position in their

life

has celebrities have to do various struggle to maintain the status among the people as compared to the doctor and teachers. To

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conclude, it

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,albeit professional worker play a vital role to develop the

country bu

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country, but

t according to my perspective government ought to pay more to

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sports ma

someone who engages in sports

sportsman

n as well as actor and actress in order to influence the people towards

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