In some countries it is now illegal to reject someone applying for a job because of his or her age. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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Age
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is the matter of mind, if you do not mind it doesn't matter, so aging would never become a hindrance in the completion of successful
job
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it is a physical one. I agree to consider
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as an illegal act,
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in fact, I
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believe it to be a positive development as only it
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doesn't give
didn't give
isn't giving
a chance to more people to showcase their
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talent, but
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provide an opportunity to grow in different fields of
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irrespective of their
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.
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essay will explore how these important factors will potentiate my stance. As a matter of fact, most people are not aware of their real talent
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at
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. They come to know about their potentials after exposure to certain factors like better educational facilities and enriched environment. If they are not allowed to do jobs at a later stage in
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, just because of their
age
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, that would be a great injustice or a cruelty in fact.
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, CEO of Apple Company was fifty years of
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when hired, and he is doing wonders for his company.
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, if there was an
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barrier, he wouldn't be able to get
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job
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.
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, it is self explanatory not to consider
age
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as a hindrance in a way of success. It is a truth universally acknowledged that
age
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ripens the mind,
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making a person more creative and opens new avenues of opportunities in later
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.
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action of rejecting a notion of an
age
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limit to be considered an eligible for certain jobs, gives hope among those who don't get opportunities in their earlier
life
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because of their poor economic condition or any other misfortune.
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, a friend of mine was not able to get
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job
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jobs
in a reputed institution just because of an exceeding
age
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limit, though he was an ambitious and legit enough for the
job
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.
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, it is discouraging for people if they are
refrained
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refraining
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job
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jobs
just because of their
age
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. In conclusion, overall it is a positive development to consider
age
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restriction as an illegal act in most of the jobs.
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will encourage all
kind
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kinds
of people to remain constantly active and take part in
country's progress
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the country's progress
with full zeal and zest. It would give them an ample amount of time to use their potentials.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • age discrimination
  • inclusive workplace
  • workplace diversity
  • workforce experience
  • equality in hiring
  • age-related stereotypes
  • demographic changes
  • economic growth
  • social security systems
  • consumer spending
  • non-discriminatory policies
  • bias
  • fair practices
  • retirement age
  • intergenerational collaboration
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