You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit.

Hello my
Accept comma addition
Hello, my
friend,
First
of all, I want to say sorry because I can't
visit
Canada. I mean I have an important event at our home. Let me explain why I can't
visit
Canada. My grandfather will come our home
next
week and we will go to my grandmother's home. I'm really sad that I can't
visit
you. I apologise for that situation my friend. If you are free
next
month I can
visit
you. We must meet
next
month. I mean
that is
only suggestion
Suggestion
the only suggestion
because I have a free ticket for going to Canada. We must use the free ticket advantage. See you later.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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