Everybody should expect to have more than one career these days. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Everybody should expect to have more than

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these days. Probably, because many people, in today’s society, have too many interests or passions.

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, there are people who like music and science, or engineering and literature, or biology and archaeology, or other different categories or sectors. Many of us, have many

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interests, but

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for

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doing

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is the reason because I do not agree to

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topic. Maybe we should have more than

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career but

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career, but

it is impossible to do because we have no

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to do it. In fact, it is very difficult to have

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full

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career

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and follow it with the right attention.

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the same

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, we must take care of family, maybe with more than

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children

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child

. In my knowledge, the people who have more than

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career

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, are stressed and without husband/wife or children. So, we can have more than

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career but

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career, but

just if we are young and without family. Another reason for my disagreement, is the difficulty to have just

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good

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. In fact, we are living in a very difficult society and there are not many

work

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works

which guarantee a good lifestyle. Many people

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are

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unoccupied and the other people have problems to find

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good

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which is compatible whit

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of them or themselves

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passion. Find more than

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is impossible or there is very low probability. For that

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, people are studying to be specialized and have the certainty of least a

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and a good future for them and their family.

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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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