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Everybody should expect to have more than one career these days. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#everybody #career
Everybody should expect to have more than
one
career
 these days. Probably, because many people, in today’s society, have too many interests or passions.
For example
, there are people who like music and science, or engineering and literature, or biology and archaeology, or other different categories or sectors. Many of us, have many
interests but
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interests, but
 low
time
 for
do
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doing
 it.
This
 is the reason because I do not agree to
this
 topic. Maybe we should have more than
one
career but
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career, but
 it is impossible to do because we have no
time
 to do it. In fact, it is very difficult to have
one
 full
time
career
 and follow it with the right attention.
In
Suggestion
At
 the same
time
, we must take care of family, maybe with more than
one
children
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child
. In my knowledge, the people who have more than
one
career
, are stressed and without husband/wife or children. So, we can have more than
one
career but
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career, but
 just if we are young and without family. Another reason for my disagreement, is the difficulty to have just
one
 good
career
. In fact, we are living in a very difficult society and there are not many
work
Suggestion
works
 which guarantee a good lifestyle. Many people
is
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are
have been
 unoccupied and the other people have problems to find
one
 good
career
 which is compatible whit
them
of them or themselves
their
 passion. Find more than
one
career
 is impossible or there is very low probability. For that
reasons
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reason
, people are studying to be specialized and have the certainty of least a
career
 and a good future for them and their family.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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