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Some people prefer young leaders, while others think that senior managers have the experience. What do you think?

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Nowadays, youth leaderships have become one of the most pivotal issues in the
business
 world. I believe that there are two reasons that show that young managers are better in
communication
 and
technological
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technology
 skills. In
this
 essay there will be a discussion for these two reasons. The
first
 reason,
this
 current generation has better
communication
 skills that help them to cope with different ages and audiences easily. Simply because of the large proportion of people they are dealing with are younger generations’ men or their colleagues. Perhaps the clearest example of
this
 is Mark Zuckerburg who is the co-founding and leading Facebook platform.He understood the adolescences’
communication
 needs and presented it on a website and a mobile application.As you can see
communication
skills plus
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skills, plus
 young leaders
create
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have created
 an excellent result in
business
.
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.
 Another reason, youth leaderships have a good technological knowledge.
In other words
,
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,
there are new gadgets that they usually use them and help them to perform their tasks quickly
such
 as
iphones
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iPhones
iPhone
phones
,
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,
androids and laptops.They can use a
business
whatsapp
 group to send their daily tasks to their workers easily or even surf the internet for ideas to expand their companies.
This
 is why it is claimed that technology extremely helps young managers in their
business
. In conclusion, there are
variety
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a variety
 of different factors that led to the need of young leaders these days; their
communication
 skills and their awareness of technological developments.And I think that if these young leaders continue using their techniques
,
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,
there will be a better future and a hope for the
next
 generation. I adopt the stance that these young
manegers
someone who controls resources and expenditures
managers
 are the best in the
business
 world.
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