Some people believe that free social service should be made compulsory for high school students .do you agree or disagree

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In
this
modern world moral valves are getting reduced.
most
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Most
of them believe that unpaid community
service
should be implemented for high
school
students.
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
strongly agree
to
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with
this
statement by following reasons.
Firstly everyone
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Firstly, everyone
gets a chance to
work
for society.
children
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Children
are coming from nuclear
family they
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family, they
do not have
chance
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a chance
the chance
to socialize with others.
this
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This
will give an opportunity to interact with others and how to
work
in
team
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a team
teams
.
this
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This
will help students to gain real life experience and teaches them to handle tough
sutuations
the general state of things; the combination of circumstances at a given time
situations
. In
this
modern era
youngsters
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youngster
is addicted towards
ekectronic
of or relating to electronics; concerned with or using devices that operate on principles governing the behavior of electrons
electronic
gadgeta
a device or control that is very useful for a particular job
gadgets
gadget
.
community
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Community
services enhance
young
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younger
pupuls
a learner who is enrolled in an educational institution
pupils
pups
to understand their
surrondings
the environmental condition
surroundings
and to generate better generation.
Secondly poor
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Secondly, poor
and needy family will
benfits
financial assistance in time of need
benefit
from
this
idea.
school
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School
kids will gain respect towards money and
work
.
they
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They
will get
pratical
concerned with actual use or practice
practical
experience how to deal with money.
in
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In
detail most of
children
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the children
are from a high class society
.
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.
they
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They
do not
havr
have or possess, either in a concrete or an abstract sense
have
an experience to look into needy people.
this
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This
makes more selfish
this
attitudes
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attitude
can be changed by implementing
compulsory social
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the compulsory social service
service
for high
school
students.
On the other
hand some
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hand, some
of them disagrees with
tbis
denotes a person or thing
this
idea.
school
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School
students are overloaded with too much
work
.
they
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They
have less time to play.
by
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By
implementing
complusory
required by rule
compulsory
community
service
may feel them worse.
but
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But
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
would
oppose that by
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oppose that, by
doing social
service
help kids to gain moral and ethical valves.
Hence i
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Hence, I
Hence I
stick to statement that social
service
should be implemented in their
cirrculum
an integrated course of academic studies
curriculum
.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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