In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.
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Include an introduction and conclusion
A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.
The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay โ it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.
The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:
Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation
Example:
To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported.After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.
Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:
The question of whether adults choose to own their first child at an older age considerably sparks a debate in society. In my view, the advantages of having a first child at a certain age significantly outweigh the disadvantages also in this essay, I will examine the reasons.
It is said that some countries have become much more affluent than others. Nowadays, more affluent countries should support poorer nations. I partially agree with this argument and I will write my arguments and why.
In most countries, the average weight of people rising and fitness rates are declining. These issues happen due to high levels of consumption of fast food, a sedentary lifestyle and a lack of regular activity. This essay will discuss reasons for negative tendencies and present ways that contribute to solving the problem.
The question of whether governments should prioritize funding space exploration or address pressing issues on Earth is a complex one that sparks heated debate. While some advocate for the pursuit of extraterrestrial life as a means of expanding our knowledge and ensuring humanity's future, others argue that addressing the challenges we face at home should take precedence. While the pursuit of new knowledge is undoubtedly important, it is crucial that governments prioritize their citizens' needs.
The period when children were physically fitter and mentally agile has gone, and in this technological era, their deteriorating health is becoming a grave issue of concern. I completely endorse the statement for several reasons, which will be elucidated in the upcoming segments.