In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.
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Include an introduction and conclusion
A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.
The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.
The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:
Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation
Example:
To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported.After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.
Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:
Government should provide good and effective health services to all populations thoroughly. I totally agree with this concept and I will elaborate my opinion in the following paragraph.
Nowadays, some people who study in some universities learn some subjects in addition to their main subjects in their free time. However, others believe that both spending time and giving attention to studying for a qualification.
It is commonly believed that global oranization should assist financially and practically to developing countries. Many person claimed they should get help only commercially ,wheras others argued advise and practial cooperation are more important for the country. I am convinced financial aid are main ingridiants of a nation in hard time to develop every section of the country.
Family’s basic needs comprise food, shelter, Clothes, and health and through that people pay a certain amount of money for them annually. Dependon their policy some peopleprefer expensive clothes which have better quality and durability and others prefer variety and choose cheaper items that enable them to buy more with the same budget.Iam opponent with the idea of the group who engaed many cheap items due to it,s negative invirinmental affects. Consumerism is a new cultural phenomenon and through that, peopleget persuaded to buy more and use more. Particularly in the mode and fashion industry, companies encourage different parts of society to become updated and follow the latest trends. Tofulfill the tendency of following society's trends with a lower income, some groups provide cheaper but more clothes. Although it seems a sensible idea, the drawbacks of this decision are noticeable. First of all, most of the cheaper clothes are not qualified and after a short time