In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.
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Include an introduction and conclusion
A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.
The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.
The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:
Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation
Example:
To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported.After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.
Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:
In recent years, technology has now increasingly applied to teaching online. However, this phenomenon has bad effects on students' experience which is misunderstanding knowledge from these applications. Moreover, this seems to be a negative advancement among trainees and it can lead them to a lazy studying style.
THE MODERN WORLD IS CHARACTERIZED BY A GROWING DEMAND FOR INSTANT GRATIFICATION. PEOPLE WANT GOODS, SERVICES, AND NEWS AS QUICKLY AS POSSIBLE. IT IS IMPORTANT TO CONSIDER WHETHER THIS IS A POSITIVE OR NEGATIVE DEVELOPMENT.
In the modern era , the news daily of the media tends to focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive development . Some residents believe that this is a drawback for one’s and society .In my opinion , I strongly disagree and it will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
From my perspective, large-scale festivals have many benefits and disadvantages. It is not only beneficial for economic development and tourism but also helps improve people's lives. But the disadvantages of the festival are air pollution, social evils,...
It is a fact that nobody will purchase printed newspapers and books because they will read everything they want online and free. Although, there are many advantages to this, I disagree with it.