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Some people believe that it is good idea to express their point of view and ideas through social media however other believe opposite do you agree or disagree

#people #idea #point #media
The graph illustrates the comments how did they feel about the Parkway hotel's customer service in 2005 and 2010. Overall, in the year of 2005, a plenty of customers were not satisfied with h
otel's service,
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the hotel's service
however
, after 5 y
ear,
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years
 the percentage of people who had a good time with their promote had increased. From
this
 change, the service had been changing better than before. In 2005, the biggest part of p
ie
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the pie
had recorded 45% and it is Satisfactory. The
second
 bigger part is Poor which is 21%. At the same time, Very poor and Good had recorded 15% and 14% respectively. The lowest figure of the percentage is 5% and it is Excellent. In 2010, the hugest piece of pie is Good (39%),
also
, Excellent had reached 28% which is
s
econd huge piece.
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a second huge piece
the second huge piece
 The number of Satisfactory and Poor had reached 17% and 12% respectively. The l
east
immediately past
last
figure is Very Poor with 4%.

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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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