Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online. Is this a positive or negative development?

Some high-level educational
institue
set up or lay the groundwork for
institute
provide
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provides
their articles or
reasearch
systematic investigation to establish facts
research
related to various topics on
internet
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the internet
so people can read online.
This
is a positive advancement in contemporary generation and
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
will present my view on the following paragraphs.
Firslty
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Firstly
,
this
favourable development of online study mostly advocate a
people
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person
from
destiute
poor enough to need help from others
destitute
distant
family who dream to read
on
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at
university but cannot due to lack of financial problem. These people can get
easy chance
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an easy chance
to look after university courses
.
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.
Furthermore they
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Furthermore, they
can grab knowledge of various subjects freely and quickly. In
result
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the result
,
this
leads to profitable life from poor situation.
For instance
, recently did research on the rural village from
nepal
a small landlocked Asian country high in the Himalayas between India and China
Nepal
, 84% of
teenegers
a juvenile between the onset of puberty and maturity
teenagers
from penurious family read journals and literatures which
was published
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were published
by colleges in google.
Secondly
, accessible for different abnormal people is considered as another good expansion of online learning.Disabled human can sit abreast of internet and go through different online lessons.
In addition
,
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,
they shares their understanding
to
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of
other physically unhealthy people who cannot see, read.
This
results in boost of literacy level of disabled people.
For example
, Ram, who cannot walk from his
todlers
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toddler's
toddler
age,
provide
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provides
various
knowlegde
the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning
knowledge
about science and its importance to small age students by reading
softcopy
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soft copy
released by
Camron university
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the Camron university
from Nepal. In conclusion,
course
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the course
that was released by various top level
institution
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institutions
in internet play vital role in providing enormous knowledge to physically unfit people and
also
help poor family to push toward
road
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the road
to
sucess
an event that accomplishes its intended purpose
success
. In my opinion
publising
the business of issuing printed matter for sale or distribution
publishing
books on online is
far better occurance
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a far better occurance
.
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  • Distance learning
  • Flexible schedule
  • Virtual classroom
  • Digital resources
  • E-learning platforms
  • Asynchronous learning
  • Synchronous learning
  • Cost-effective
  • Self-paced study
  • Technical difficulties
  • Blended learning
  • Online modules
  • Remote access
  • Student engagement
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