rich countries should aallow jobs for skilled and knowlegeable employers who are from poor coutries. Do you agree or disagree.

Even after the decades of modernisation I can clearly say with credence, that in most of

the countries, rich

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the rich countries,

has been always rich and poor has been always poor, even after lots of great supports and changes by the government.Which in my opinion

job

is the main cause of it, by

favering

promote over another

favouring

fathering

furthering

wealthy people with better

job

without knowing their skills which

lands

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land

in leaving behind the poor people assuming them as lesser privilege.

Firstly

,

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in my opinion

,

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,

I

belief

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believe

believed

that it's important for rich countries to give

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jobs

to skilled and knowledgeable

employers

a worker who is hired to perform a job

employees

from poor countries, cause it may bring large scale of development which they never aspect.

For instance

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,

even if rich countries

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have

their own skilled and high knowledge

employer but

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employer, but

they are not same as

skilled

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a skilled employer

employer

from poor countries because

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plural of "this"

these

peoples

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people

are more hard working and loyal towards what they are doing with

perfect goal

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the perfect goal

in their mindset.

As a result

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,

it

bring

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brings

better environment and trust within workers.

Secondly

, the way the poor countries think can be very helpful and logic.

For example

, to improve

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a

country we have to able to think from both the

aspect

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aspects

of rich and poor

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,

therefore

being from poor

countries these

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countries, these

employers know what is the weakness of the country and how to tackle the hardest problems due to their experience.

Lastly

,

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,

likewise

in

ladhak

being

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a

one of the small developing state in India there was scarcity of

water but

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water, but

one teacher has invented

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a

method to save water for whole the year which has been

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a great benefit

for them. In

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concluding

,

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,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

want to reiterate that if we want to develop once

country it's

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country, it's

very important to give

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jobs

to skilled and knowledgeable

employer

from poor countries

then

giving to

rich countries

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a rich country's employer

rich country's employer

employer

without any skill and knowledge.