Your neighbor is a musician who practices the piano during the day. Sometimes the sound of his playing causes problems for you, especially when you need to study at home. Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter - Explain that the sound of his piano playing is very loud in your apartment - Describe how his practicing affects you - Suggest a solution that might work for both of you Write at least 150 words

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Stephan, I'm Minh Hoang, the student who lives

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to your apartment. I'm writing to make some complaints about the loud noise from your

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piano, especially when you're playing at night. It's really great for me to have

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to enjoy your songs beforehand and they are masterpieces.

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, sometimes when you're playing in a big volume, it made me difficult to stay focused on studying, especially when I was cramming for the examinations at school. Many people who live on the same floor have

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talked to me about the noise that makes them feel very frustrated.

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, I've received many low scores on the tests; my parents and teachers are extremely worried about my performance due to the inability to concentrate on studying.

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, there are many ones who have been suffering from severe stress, and they are about to

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to the managers if

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is not solved. It would mean a lot to me if you could reduce the sound when you're writing songs as it not only affects me

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other families. I know it's impossible for a musician to stop

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, but you could consider doing it in a lower tone.

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, it would be good for you to play

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during the day because at that time, I am at the university and other people are busy at work, too. I would not like to let

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break our neighbourhood relationship as well as you will make some actions to prevent it from going too far. Yours sincerely, Minh Hoang

Wed Jan 29 2020

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

264 words

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar; which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Governments should spend money on education than that of sports and recreation. Do you agree or disagree?

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some people think that children should be encouraged to play outdoor games that require physical activities instead of playing computer games at home. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays both men and women spend a lot of money on beauty care. This was not so in the past. What may be the root cause of this behaviour? Discuss the reasons and possible results.