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Children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching television. However, television cannot replace the book as a learning tool, which is why children are less well-educated today. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

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In the current world, visual media has a huge presence across the globe.
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 is being widely used as a supplement for education by students. In my opinion, books can never be replaced by
television
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 as a means of learning gadget.
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 can be proven by analysing how books have the advantage that they can focus on a particular subject deeply as well as provide
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 flexibility. It is apparent that a particular book focuses on a specific subject. As most of the programs in the
television
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 are sponsored by an organisation, advertisement runs at regular intervals
between the programs the
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between the programs
 people watch. In the case of books, advertisements are very rare and
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 there are limited distractions on learning a subject.
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, we can turn back the pages we have covered, if
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any, doubt
 arises reading the
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 topics. As per the report released on 25th September 2015, by the Week magazine, 90% of the school students prefer
books
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the books
 over the
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 for educational purposes.
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 books have an edge over
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.
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 programmes are aimed to entertain people when there are very few educative channels for students.
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, there is no surety that a student would spend his
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 in front of the TV
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producer
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. Another important advantage books have
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been
 the ability of the readers to choose the
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 to read as per their convenience. It is a fact that some students like to read in the early morning while some others in the evening, so that they have maximum concentration. But in case of
television
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, unless we have digital storage devices like DVD or USB drive; it is not possible to play as we need.
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, most of the
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 programmes have a schedule and the students need to be punctual in case they need to attend it. It is obvious that
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the book
 gives the users to plan their
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 as per their wish. As a conclusion, it is obvious that books have an advantage over
television
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, as it provides deeper concentration on the subjects and better
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 management. It is predicted that a few subjects, which requires visual effect to understand, may choose
television
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 as a mean of the learning tool.
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