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Due to rise in university fees arts subjects like history and philosophy should not be taught anymore. Only degree courses should be taught for better employment oppertunities. Do you agree or disagree?

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The rising population
have resulted
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has resulted
 in a major unemployment problem. In the recent days we experience a hike in
expence
amounts paid for goods and services that may be currently tax deductible (as opposed to capital expenditures)
expenses
experience
 for higher education and competition
,
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,
 so it is believed if universities imparted only vocational training that would increase the chance of
employement
the state of being employed or having a job
employment
.
This
 essay will argue
,
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,
 why banning arts subjects
to meet
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meet
 employment criteria
is’nt
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isn’t
 the best option. Subjects
such
 as philosophy and history are one of the stepping stone to understand our traditions, culture and mindset. Philosophy helps us to increase our critical thinking and understand any situation in depth. Our food
habbits
an established custom
habits
habit
,
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,
 colloquial languages, rituals are related ages back to our ancestors
;
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;
 without having knowledge of arts its impossible to know our roots.
For instance
 famous historians have put effort and decoded the manuscripts back from the Indus Valley Civilisation, which have
proved to beneficial
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proved beneficial
 in planning the layout of many new cities. Acquiring higher education should be completely based on area of interest and merit. Not all students find science and business easy to cope with
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,
 whereas others find their
call
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calling
 in gaining expertise in arts subjects. If, at all there should be a dire need to provide
degree course
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a degree course
 to minimize unemployment
,
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,
 still subjects
such
 as history
,
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,
philosoply
a belief (or system of beliefs) accepted as authoritative by some group or school
philosophy
 should be
qincluded
enclosed in the same envelope or package
included
 in basic training.
This
 will not only help pupils gain knowledge that would boost their
career but
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career, but
also
 prepare them to analyse stress
situation
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situations
 better. To conclude all subjects have their
individdual
a human being
individual
individuals
 importance and excluding a few from the curriculum would disrupt the system of
balanced education
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a balanced education
.

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