Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantage?

Begin learning a foreign
language
at primary
school
is very much
important rather
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important, rather
than secondary
school
. Because
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
the age of primary
school
students can catch everything easily rather than secondary
school
. There are lots of advantages begin learning a foreign
language
at primary
school
. Students can communicate the whole world with
there
of them or themselves
their
foreign
language
. I think that
language
should be
english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
. Because English is an international
language
. If they know
this
language
very well, they can be connected with the hole world very easily. And their opportunities become more when they know a foreign
language
such
as English. If students can learn a foreign
language
at primary their basic with be more stronger. Like we can see that in job sector a foreign
language
is very much important. In business
sector it
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sector, it
also play
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also plays
has also played
is also playing
same role
Suggestion
the same role
,
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,
if they know a foreign
language
they can expand their business
world wide
involving the entire earth; not limited or provincial in scope
worldwide
very easily. So every
children
Suggestion
child
should learn a foreign
language
during their primary.
Other wise when
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Otherwise, when
Otherwise when
they admitted in secondary for their academic pressure they can't able to catch
this
language
properly. There are
also
some disadvantages like children should always remember their culture and mother
language
. Some of the case students give more importance the foreign
language
rather than their mother
language
. At
last
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least
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
think that students should Begin learning a foreign
language
at primary
school
. In the ratio of advantages and disadvantages we can see that advantages are more than disadvantages.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cognitive abilities
  • pronunciation
  • self-conscious
  • cultural awareness
  • global society
  • proficiency levels
  • competitive job market
  • foundational skills
  • qualified teachers
  • recreational activities
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