The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates how many men and
women
Use synonyms
students
in Use synonyms
further
education Linking Words
is
studying full-time or part-time in Britain from periods 1970/71, 1980/81 and 1990/91. The numbers are measured in thousands.
Change the verb form
are
Overall
, there's an increased number of male and female full-time Linking Words
students
. There is Use synonyms
also
a steady growth in Linking Words
women
studying part-time in Use synonyms
further
education even surpassing the males by the year 1990/91, Linking Words
while
men Linking Words
students
had a decline in the year 1980/81.
In 1970/71 male part-time Use synonyms
students
are more dominant than Use synonyms
women
with 1 million Use synonyms
students
. Use synonyms
However
, by 1980/81 the Linking Words
male
Correct quantifier usage
number of male
part timers
decreased by almost 80%. And by the end of 1990/91 male part-timers were just over 800 thousand Add a hyphen
part-timers
while
Linking Words
women
have 1200 million enrollees Use synonyms
thus
making Linking Words
the
female Correct article usage
apply
students
at the top spot of student part-timers.
The number of both men and Use synonyms
women
in full-time education increased from 1970/71 to 1900/91, with a significant Use synonyms
increased
in female full-time Replace the word
increase
students
from just about 100 thousand in 1970/71 to above 200 thousand in 1980/81.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words women, students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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