Air travel can only benefit the richest people in the world. Ordinary people can get no advantage with the development of air travel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Rich people can afford to
travel
by airplan
e. Ordin
ary people cannot get air
travel
causes of money. I mostly disagree with
this
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this
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an aircraft that has a fixed wing and is powered by propellers or jets
aeroplanes
ed to be the richest people because you have to pay for it a lot. But in another way if
you ma
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way, if
nage your time and plans so you can book your ticker faster the price will more cheaper.
Also
now many airlines have promotions and sometimes it's very cheap. Personally, I am an ordinary person
but I alwa
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person, but
ys travelled by plane I
planne
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plane, I
d to book very early to get good prices. It's can safe my time I don'
t
have to sit in the car stuck in the traffic
also
air trip can
also
help the traffic congestion Another key point is it i
s tru
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is, it
e that sometimes it to expensive some people can'
t
afford for it. Public transport can safe th
e mo
save from ruin, destruction, or harm
save
ney or in some places they don'
t
have airport
like i
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an airport
n rustic
area so peo
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the rustic area
a rustic area
rustic areas
ple don'
t
have choice
even t
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a choice
choices
hey want to travell
ed by pla
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travel
ne. In conclut
ion, Air
a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusion
conciliation
consolation
travel
is a good option to use it's can save your time and it's sa
fety
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
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l vehicl
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